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greenmerlin
Age: 25 Zodiac: 
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:06 pm |
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I'd suggest the title: Darkness. I like your poem, but I hope you don't feel that way every day. Brightest Blessings.
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CMyst77
Age: 32 Zodiac: 
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Location: Hollister, California
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 3:42 am |
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LOL Thank you for the suggestion! Actually, this poem has been in my collection since High School, which was, to say, quite some time ago! LOL Thank you for your well wishes tho! I am quite enjoying reading the different poetic views of others in this forum!
Sincerely,
Cory
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