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Posts: 15 · Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:53 pm

You Made Me Leave
The rain can't make you wet
The sun can't make you sweat
Birds can't make you fly
Flowers can't attract your eyes
Wind can't make you move
So what can I do?
It's the silence in you
That broke mine
It's the coldness in your heart
That set mine on fire
It's you that made me leave

Posts: 215 · Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 2:03 pm

Lonely wrote:

You Made Me Leave
The rain can't make you wet
The sun can't make you sweat
Birds can't make you fly
Flowers can't attract your eyes
Wind can't make you move
So what can I do?
It's the silence in you
That broke mine
It's the coldness in your heart
That set mine on fire
It's you that made me leave

Hmmm... Nicely written ... hmm... very interesting... The person seems to be a challenge for you... Like the Pandora's box ... perhaps even as dangerous one as it was. It's good you're able to write about it with your poems. Take care!

Posts: 28 · Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:12 am

good one ..i enjoyed it