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Posts: 20 · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:20 am

Sky Dialog

When I dialog with the sky
there's no catalog of why's
just a rattling off
of my's

My heart beat rocks
like a cradle, my foundation
stable, light and mass
interchangeable
let me be

I walk around in
hibernation, recoiled
in transformation
riding an inner wave of
unconscious optimization

Posts: 3125 · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:18 pm

i liked this poem, thank you.

Posts: 20 · Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 8:29 pm

Thanks for the comment, recently I revised this poem at another site. Hopefully this helps the rhythm in the first stanza.

When I dialog with the sky
there's no catalog of why's
just a rattling off
of my my my

My heart beat rocks
like a cradle, my foundation
stable, light and mass
interchangeable
let me be

I walk around in
hibernation, recoiled
in transformation
riding an inner wave of
unconscious optimization

Thanks again, Suzisco.