IN LIGHTER VEIN
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If poetry must startle and awaken through expletives
It would have been called “worse”
If aggression is the only way that remains for attracting attention
Humanity may be reduced to a memory hardly of note or mention
Insecurity projected elsewhere is a stone cast
Assuming the storm will ne’er return to take down the erect mast!

Not much sweetness around, sadly
But judging it from a ‘distant’, detached point of pointless purity
Produces another dream waiting to assume the persona of an interpretor
Or a footprint on the sands of time, that may be a mirage...
Or soon will be when the WAVE returns to reclaim its SAND!

If thoughts and beliefs are what create and raise a reality
Then it makes sense to focus on Beauty and not the Beast
It takes practice, it takes love but that is nothing new ...
Ask any new mother, or an old one, who still has memories intact!

Rohiniranjan
2007-04-28 [22:36 CDT]

There is alot to think about in your poem rohiniranjan

there will always be people who believe poetry to be pointless, but you seem to have captured the essence and communicated your point well.  Thank you.

suzi

{blushin'}

[quote="suzisco"]There is alot to think about in your poem rohiniranjan

there will always be people who believe poetry to be pointless, but you seem to have captured the essence and communicated your point well.  Thank you.

suzi[/quote]